This is the First Draft of my Trailer. I really like the way the colours come across in it but there are still several pieces of footage that I want to include as at the moment the trailer portrays the idea that the movie only revolves around one person. To correct this I need to collect more footage of the other character I want to include, and have the two characters interact with each other. I want to try and include more difficult shots such as an arc shot and an aerial shot as I think this will help improve the trailer.
Trailer First Draft Feedback
- Possibly include a POV Shot
- Include Institution Logos
- Maybe have a Voice Over to explain the narrative
- Make the story-line clearer
- Have more footage of art work
- Add footage of the 'Conflict'
After receiving the feedback I began to look for ways to make the narrative of my trailer clearer. I came to the conclusion that I wont have enough time to include an extra character fully, so I decided instead to have the main character receive a text message from an unknown number which then leads to footage from the past of maybe a party scene where a fight breaks out. I think that this would help hint to the audience that something happened in the past which causes the character to then spiral out of control.
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